Rough Draft

Today was a lot of work, Lisa & I sat down and hammered out a lot of details about this particular story which is to be titled, DEERBORN. Here are the first drafts of the first two pages.

"We drove thirty minutes to the park, hardly spoke. more often than not, an obvious disconnect rears its head. I can't stop analyzing every moment as it passes, judging myself, studying her. Reflecting even in the midst of living, thinking about her, how she acts, how she moves. She almost seems to ignore the truth of our relationship. With…"
There is a pause.
“…With how she is, with how I am.”

The entire thing is coming along far better than either of us even conceived. It's all been such a cohesive project. If you enjoy what we've shown, please follow us here on blogspot, and add diggs as well. The more exposure we all can build for our project, the better. So let us know what you think!

more to come
-matt & lisa